First Post- E-mail to the theacher

AFTER
Dear Teacher,

My name is Nourdine Idir and this year I'm going to study 1st of
batxillerat the second time  Ies Castelló D' Empuries.

I like study in the class but when i m in my home i like to watch tv and play games of
the ps3, this year i will do the maximum posible to do not do this and do homework. I play taekwondo 4 time's a week thats evry class 2 hours of duration. In my free times i like to do sport, and do exercice

In english  this year i wont to have the best's marks but if i wont this i have to study
too much and do the homework like what i'm doing now with this exercice.

BEFORE
Dear Teacher,

My name is Nourdine Idir and this year I'm going to study 1st of
batxillerat the second time at Ins Castelló D' Empuries.


I like studying in class but when I' m  at home I like to watch tv and play games of
 ps3, this year I will do the maximum possible, so I will do my homework every day. I play taekwondo 4 times a week that every class lasts 2 hours . In my free times I like to do sport and do exercice in the gym

In English  this year I want to have the best marks but if I want this I have to study
a lot and do the homework like I'm doing now with this exercice.